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Friday, October 19, 2012

Flame (erotica)



Dusk blanketed the night in its darkest robe.

The man walked slowly to where she laid.  Under the flicker of the lone flame that escaped the carelessly hung lamp at the corner of her room, the man looked at the naked curves of her sleeping body that moved rhythmically with her breath.  The place was mostly dark otherwise and he saw her ample curves glistening under the golden hue of the wavering flame.  There was some sort of beauty in watching her sleep.

The man knew he only had some more time left before dawn breaks and with it, the world around him would wake up.  He somewhat enjoyed the loneliness the sleeping world gave him but he knew he needed to get to her before the world woke up. 

He went closer to her and laid his hand on her sleeping warm body.  He caressed his hand slowly along the length of her sinuous body and touched her in a way only he knew.  She slowly opened her dark, beautiful eyes and instantly recognized his impatience.  She was used to his ways and knew exactly what he wanted.   She moved and positioned herself so that he could slowly let his hands run gradually under her.  She welcomed him.

Both knew they had only little time before the world wakes up and thus hurried into play.  She felt his hand touching her in a familiar way and she felt his hand hold her voluptuousness and then press her, first slowly, then gently and then hard.  She closed her eyes, cringing with a sense of both pain and pleasure.  And he pressed her again.  Harder.  And harder.  And harder.  Again.  And again.  And again.

In the flicker of the lone flame wavering in the feeble wind, the two early bodies went about with their act oblivious to the world around them, whom they safely assumed was still in slumber under the dark of the night. 

After a while, he was done.  He was satisfied.  He got what he had wanted.  He stood up to leave.  Dawn broke and a faint wind doused the flickering flame of her lamp. 

She was happy too.  And she knew that he would be back for the same the next dawn too; it had become routine and she was now used to him, his way and his act.

For he was the farmer and she, was his only cow. 

32 comments:

  1. Oh sweet lord. Talking about ruining erotica with the wrong animal instinct!! :D

    Either ways, left a smile on my face.

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    1. Thanks Soumya for dropping by.. really happy fr ur news btw:)

      Glad that it brought a smile.. but yup, I do that a lot pretty well - ruining things! :)

      do drop by more Somz :)

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    2. Thank you so much, I sure will.

      I see an addition to the title now and the tag called 'Indian erotica' cracks me up. Imagine someone filtering by the tag hoping for some Kamasutra and this comes up!!

      :D

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  2. OH BOY....

    my mind the MAN mentality was running , galloping away till the last line :)

    on serious thought, It is a art to do that, I have milked a cow when we stayed in our village , in the good old days.. and it takes a lot of patience to do it and its not as easy as it looks ..


    Bikram's

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  3. GOOD one :D
    Especially since I took special pains to hide the screen as I'm reading this in the office :P

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  4. Goodness! I knew there was going to be a twist at the end! Cracked me up, this did :D

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  5. Oooh! Thank goodness for the twist. So. Much. Fun.

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  6. I knew there was going to be an anti-clmax (oh! yes, pun intended!).. but this was beyond my wildest dreams!! Awesome... just can't wipe off that smile can ya? :-)

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    1. hahaaa.. Loved the pun..:D ..BTW awesome post RAJ..:D

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    2. Thanks Hari.. glad u liked it :)

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  7. I like the idea of seeing a woman as a cow :)

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  8. Good one.. it took me a couple of comments to actually understand what this one was all about.. I can be very dumb.

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    1. Nah, thats not true.. reading ur blog n dumb is the last thing on the mind :)

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  9. I love how you mislead everyone! Great ending! Beautiful descriptions too! :D

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    1. Thanks a lot American Girl..glad u liked it :)

      Welcum to my blog..do drop by more often, American Girl :)

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  10. Haha, smart, that. I thought this would kinda justify the name of your blog. ;)

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    1. Damn, so sorry Revacious, forgot to reply to this comment earlier.. u know, I had read it, told myself that I'd comment later and then just forgot bout it completely... soo sorry bout this yaar...

      hahaha... a cow n me...hmmm.. conisdering I'm a non veg mallu, yup, I like cows ;)

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  11. "She closed her eyes, cringing with a sense of both pain and pleasure" - I mean, really..??

    Holy Cow, this was such a put-off..;-) :P

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    1. Dude, so sorry fr not replying earlier.. guess I just forgot to comment .. really sorry dude...

      Hahaha... I was trying to be as pulpy fiction as possible :D

      Clearly, I need more practice :D

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  12. Hmmm... can I post an image?

    [img]https://fbcdn-sphotos-h-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-prn1/557833_10151112566488564_294510024_n.jpg[/img]

    If it doesn't work, copy and paste the url. This image reminded me of your blog post. :) Cheers.

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    1. Hahaha.. LOL!!! awesome pic!! :D

      Thanks for this American Girl .. u said, it does bring this post's characters to the fore ;)

      thanks again, American Girl:)

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  13. GOD! lol. The first part awed me and the last part was like *shits!* LOl. Ur a real entertainer. Thank you for bloggin :D made my dull day (2mmrow exams :|)
    :D

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    1. Hey Shalini, welcome back yaar.. hope ur zams went well.. glad u liked the post.. made my day :)

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  14. Holy..... cow! RAJ I didn't see that one coming haha so funny. Good thing I'm married...

    P.S. I've had to rebuild my blog from scratch (don't ask). My new address is www.thebluegrumpster.blogspot.com . Don't forget to press that button okay? I hope you're doing fine :)

    RCB

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    1. RCB, that makes the two of us now :)

      Like I said...following u :D

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    2. That makes two of us? Tell me more....

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    1. GG!!! Long, long time yaar!! ow u been? :D

      Thanks fr ur kind, kind words GG...hope to see u more :)

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  16. The only words which escape me are: HOLY Cow!

    On another note, have you read Memories of My Melancholy Whores by Gabriel García Márquez. This post reminded me of that story. Do read if you haven't already.

    Joy always,
    Susan

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    1. :D

      Aah, heard bout it.. will do so soon. actually liked the concept fr the book.. I rememebr an old mallu movie that was made on the same concept :)

      Thanks for dropping by Susan :)

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